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Forever is and always was just a fucking lie

Sun Sep 21, 2008, 8:32 PM
  • Mood: Miserable
  • Listening to: Marilyn Manson
  • Drinking: way too damn much..
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"I love you.." she whispered nervously as she pressed her face against his chest.
"I love you too." he replied, closing his arms around her.
"Promise?"she stared up at him with sullen eyes.
"Forever." he gently kissed her lips.
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any one know whats wrong with this paragraph of the story?
-Ill tell you whats wrong.EVERYTHING HE SAID WAS A LIE.
and oh well imagine this: The whole fucking story is full of lies like that.Every god damn page of the fairytale was based on lies.
I hate him so fucking bad right now..and yet..It kills me to know hes not going to be on the other end of the line when I pick up the phone anymore...I threw the ring when she told me..and then I cried as I sat staring at my naked finger...but its clear as day that one line in this book is true: "YOU'RE JUST A FUCKING WHORE!" he screamed at her threw the phone..

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~Rebelegade Sep 22, 2008, 3:15:29 PM
:(
:heart: :heart: :heart:

I'm sorry your hurting, luff.

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Love like you've never been hurt... :heart:
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~tears4everfalling Sep 22, 2008, 6:20:39 PM
...it only hurts when Im sober..

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If you could only see the way she loves me maybe you would understand.. - Tonic.
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~Rebelegade Sep 23, 2008, 8:55:43 AM
But.... being not sober isn't healthy.
D:

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Love like you've never been hurt... :heart:
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~tears4everfalling Sep 24, 2008, 8:41:53 AM
I know but...its what gets me through the day..

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If you could only see the way she loves me maybe you would understand.. - Tonic.
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~Rebelegade Sep 24, 2008, 3:18:57 PM
Can't music get you through the day?
Or lemon drops! :D Or butterscotches! :D :D

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Love like you've never been hurt... :heart:
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~tears4everfalling Sep 24, 2008, 7:39:26 PM
there was a time when music could get me through.But now all it does is make it worse because it makes me think...

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If you could only see the way she loves me maybe you would understand.. - Tonic.
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~Rebelegade Sep 25, 2008, 2:50:30 PM
Mebbe you could try wordless music! :D
My doctor told me, that if I listen to and read really depressing music/books, then I'm going to feel depressed and everything.

So mebbe, you could try finding some really up beat jazz, or African music or all instrumental bands (not necessarily jazz/african/classical they can be rock and pop too) so that way, you can listen to music ANNND have a nice beat to dance too! :D

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Love like you've never been hurt... :heart:
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~tears4everfalling Sep 26, 2008, 9:44:56 PM
heehee..dancing is bad for me...I get tooo into it..

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If you could only see the way she loves me maybe you would understand.. - Tonic.
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~Rebelegade Sep 27, 2008, 10:11:01 AM
I hate dancing ._.
It's haarrrd

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Love like you've never been hurt... :heart:
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